FCAs                                                               Nayan machhi

1.     Descriptive details                                            November 4, 2011

 2.  Flashback                                                          English 6-                                                      

      3.     Dialogue                                                           Personal Narrative     

                                                       

                                                          

                                          My Trip

                  As soon as I stepped outside of the bright world of Florida, the sun was smoldering on the earth. It was so hot I couldn’t even walk, so then we took the bus. It was much cooler than outside. The bus we took, drove us to the Rental car shop. In the Rental car shop we rented a huge dodge van. Everyone liked the Dodge except for me. “ Can we have a better car than this” I said.

                     My dad replied “No, because if we take a smaller car we can’t even fit any bags.”

                        I didn’t like the car because if you want the a.c faster and colder you have to drive more rapidly.The car didn’t have a very good method.First we went to Taco Bell since we were hungry. I ordered two chalupas without the meat. After we were done eating are stomach were very full. Then we went back to the car, to walk around Miami. When we reached to Miami, there were a lot of people. I didn’t really like Miami that greatly because some of the teenagers were going wild. They were screaming a lot, and they were riding on a small hummer car. The hummer didn’t even look that actual.  I just liked the beach. The beach was awesome. The beach was fresher than any beach that I been to so far. The waves were so peaceful that day. We stayed at the beach far an hour because we had to go to are hotel. The hotel was so cool. The best part was that it was cold in there. But the only thin I am scared about is that maybe there will be a lizard walking somewhere in the room.

                                Are room was on the twelfth floor. Are room was the highest floor. We only stayed there for about three days. After that we went on the bus to go to the airport because we were going home. At first I didn’t really like the trip but then it turned to be better!!!